Enjoy Pizza!

[slinky]

Pizzeria - Restaurant "Da Gigi".
The best pizza..

www.creative360.it/PizzeriaGigi/Tour.html

Any opinion appreciated, thanks for watching!

Slinky

[mathrafal]

I think it has good potential, but a couple of points:

1. Your white balance seems a little off, as though you had a daylight setting. I can understand the point, since there seems to me to be a natural light source, which will otherwise seem very blue. However, it's small and a little PS work will correct that.

2. It is, perhaps time to start (really) learning HDR techniques to correct the blown-out areas.

3. If you are going to use music, then let's have the whole piece, rather than 16 bars. It can be very frustrating otherwise. There are plenty of royalty-free sources, which are not expensive.

Jon

[Ton den Ouden]

I agree 100% with all of Jon's remarks and I also see the potential. Hope you see the remarks as a challenge Slinky, I look forward to more and better work!

Good luck, Ton

[slinky]

Thanks a lot for your replies and suggestions!
Your interest is very valuable.

You are completely right about post production and HDR issues, since I'm not very good and skilled in that.
I'm not a professional photographer and I need to improve my images quality, I see..

Anyway, regarding the white balance, I know it's not such natural but I chose a warmer look on purpose.

And I used a short song to have a lighter file inside the project.
Would a bigger file affect the loading time of the music?

Well, if you check again, some graphic and functions have changed.

www.creative360.it/PizzeriaGigi/Tour.html

[mathrafal]

I don't really see a big difference.

The warmth I understand. However, your whites need to be white and not look like nicotine stains.

As for the music, 29 seconds or 29 minutes... It makes no difference, since it is streamed. A 22000 hz bit rate would be fine for most computers if you want faster streaming (ie initial pickup).

29 seconds is maddening, however.

Jon